Black Poetry : lightfull

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Oct 6, 2002.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lightfull

    it came out off a corner
    so unexpected
    suprised
    it was wonderfull.....
    it blinded me
    it froze me
    and after that thawed me

    it made my heart pump tree times faster than before
    it makes you forget all the sorrows off youre day
    for a minute
    it brings so much joy to our hearts

    it makes you laugh .....somethimes even makes you cry....
    as if god it telling you....
    yes i,m still here
    i,m so alive

    you can never have enough of " it""
    and yes you used to do " it " to
    without seeing this you miss a lifetime experience

    this "it" is strong
    this "it" is love
    this "it" is a gift off life


    This "it" is a CHILDS SMILE........
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its a mirracle everythime i see this.......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes!! that very smile a child display is true joy
    of heart within ya soul i love it when the flash that smile
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Piece!

    Reas
     
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    nice piece...bring me some mo'.
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i schould have done this a while ago......but i wanna thank you
    guys for responding..on this poem......because it is one off my closest
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...........thanks
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so true :)
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it is..... tweet t much love.....
    i saw one today.......thats why i post it again......it made me cry...
    hey you use to do it do......
     
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    And if you think the smile is beautiful
    wait til you hear the laugh

    A childs smile is definately a heart warmer! Thanks liberty!