Black Poetry : Lighter than Expected

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there was confusion in Eve's eyes

    she was desperately trying to get her dough to rise

    but it wouldn't

    it couldn't be

    Martha White told her that adding yeast could help her see

    [somewhere in the Lincoln sea]

    1st mate :

    so, how long do you think we’ll be stuck

    [howard shakes his head]

    howard :

    i was hoping for better luck

    1st mate :

    she’s still love-struck

    [Howard nods]

    how is she coping?

    howard :

    Anaheim Ducks

    1st mate :

    really?

    howard :

    she loves those guys

    1st mate :

    maybe you should buy a hockey puck

    [Howard shrugs]

    maybe …

    [somewere in Luck Wisconsin]

    bob :

    there you go passing the buck again

    gary :

    i’m telling you Eve & that guy are just friends

    bob :

    pass the Donald duck

    and how do you figure that?

    gary :

    i just know

    bob :

    well, if you ask me, I think he snuck into her heart

    gary :

    if he did, He must have a lot of charm

    bob :

    enough to fill up three pickup trucks from what i hear

    she was a sittin duck

    [back at Eve’s]

    no need for alarm, I’ll figure this out

    i told him my feathers were already plucked

    but he continued to shout I love you

    what was I supposed to do?

    then it struck Eve

    what if he succeeded

    before he struck out?

    would she have conceded

    that he stuck his neck out for …. ?

    [front door opens]

    brad :

    honey I’m home

    eve :

    i’m in here honey

    [enters the kitchen]

    brad :

    what are you making?

    eve :

    cinnamon rolls

    brad :

    smells good

    give me a kiss

    {smooch}

    i’ll be in the backyard if you need me

    eve :

    okay sweetie

    [Brad exits]

    see Howard, my waters receded

    and soon yours will too

    but the more she kneeded

    the more she needed

    her husband




    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes when you think love has gone out to sea, it comes in with the tide, penetrating everything it touches, so you won't forget... Intriguing, howard.
     
  3. phynxofkemet

    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your style

    is just plain cool - i really like how u do whatchado, :qqb007:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    waterwaves of love that comes in by the oceans
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Running From what is happening and what is true......complicated situation....and Yall are doing some serious Traveling! uuuhhh, can I get some flyer miles , some time share, or something!????
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'll see what i can do platinumillity1 :10900:

    thanks watzinaname :)


    thanks phynxofkmt :wave:


    oceans??? wow!!!!

    thanks $$rich$$ :coffee:
     
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