Black Poetry : Lighten Up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Mar 2, 2004.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lighten up a little
    Don't forget to enjoy
    You're way too serious
    It's starting to annoy
    You've got to laff and smile
    At least once in a while
    Don't nobody want to be aroun'
    An infinite frown
    If your solution
    And your idea of revolution
    Means being a sour puss
    An unbearable cuss
    Go on alone
    i got a Revolution of my own
    That includes some happiness filled hours
    And time to smell the flowers
    You're way over serious
    You're cruising toward delirious
    Yo' whassup
    Come on
    Relax
    Lighten up
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so very on point and real deal
    i feel the smiling kill of no thrill
    but a cold chill to da solution
    yet da path of self Revolution
    flow on brother i hear ya !!!!..
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we get so low all we see is the ground. Looks like you don't want to be dragged down that route. Keep the flow going.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    rasheed...
    you make me see the glass is half full
    not half empty
    keep letting us remember that..
    thanks for the poem
    and the energy
     
  5. caramelpython

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    Nice scribe poet... smooth real smooth indeed. :sand:
     
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