Black Poetry : LIFT ME UP ! ( Kwansaba style poeticly)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Kwansaba poetry style created in 1995



    Deepest desires pitted within me, lace bottom
    my love spool on the notion to
    betray my body while (baptize) in you.
    My feet cold as steal parts stiffin
    sensual motion callin "am i your victim"
    my heart scream out for you only
    I pray to keep control ova self


    :SuN013:
     
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    y. You baptized in her


    Deep Brother...
    You gonna lose control
    Great flow $$RICH$$
     
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    y. You baptized in her


    Deep Brother...
    You gonna lose control
    Great flow $$RICH$$


    Man HODEE i hope i can regain myself before i explode or be taken by her
    stormy stardust of love. Thankz a million bruh !
     
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    i hear you

    tread carefully

    don't lose yourself brethren

    just capture the moment
     
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    It's within my grasp to behold in .....I'm in control so'ja , moments are mines !
    thankz a mill for da visit to lift me up again.
     
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    Sometimes when we want to maintain control over our feelings, our feelings have other ideas. Enjoying this Kwansaba style poet.
     
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    so true sister , Thankz for the visit as alwayz
     
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