Black Poetry : Lifetouch

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Feb 12, 2002.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this Elationship revolves around more than
    bedroom antics and hopeless romantic dvd's
    in wide screen format
    hopefully u know i that
    i do more than love u
    i adore your life existence
    in a sense u complete the rest
    of me that i'm still searching
    for and haven't found yet/preset
    love 101.9 in my thought process so
    i can listen to smooth'dout love ballads
    catching a glimpse of your body's itallic
    curviture-hate to see u go when i rise
    allbeit real, i know the feel of your thighs
    can't support my weight all day
    so i pray that u go nowhere without
    visions of me etched in your stare.......

    then........

    i hope later we can compare the old
    days with the
    new realizing the most minute things
    that brought us through changes/relocation/evolving
    together growing old but getting
    better
    at
    the
    same
    time.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummm! hi-wa da ole wit the new and hope for better days
    as tyme pass wit age .....hummmm! u gave me something to think on .......Thank u
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA_Boi.


    ...wwwhooooaaa!

    this "elationship"...?? hmmm... you mind if i borrow
    that word? anyway! i love-did this!! (& you know i
    wouldn't say it... if it wasn't true!) write some 'mo
    stuff just like dis, heah... kay? :)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx RICH for thinkin on the peice.
    hopefully your thoughts will lead u right.

    MISS GA-thanx for the reply. i try.
    u can use the word, i'm sure u know how, wit yo
    verbage and e'rythang.

    holla.
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Realizing the simple things....

    That brings us all together.
    Thanks poet! This piece is very very well expressed.
    I'm feeling this!:)
     
  6. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx RASHAD for the input.
    preeshate ya time & read.

    hw
     
  7. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done...
     
  8. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This one was felt all up in hea!
    Beautifully expressed!:)
     
  9. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx DANILYN and HB for the replies.
    i'm glad i'm well felt in the
    fam.
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi-wa...

    This piece is like that bro!!!

    Dug it!!!

    :peace:
    GQ