Black Poetry : *Lifetime*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Jun 20, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I took a year to really look at you....
    A couple of months to think.....
    Loved you for 17 years.....
    And in 3 seconds, I blinked
    I stole $1 million dollers
    Just to taste 6 seconds of your kiss
    I'd replay that moment eternally
    It would be my only wish
    I climbed the tallest mountain
    To look at the stars in your eyes
    To look at our life together
    It was written in the skies
    I have known you for years
    Talked with you for hours
    I think of you every mintute,every day
    Every second when I'm in the shower
    Milliseconds of daydreams pass
    Daydreams of me kissing you
    You're my soul mate De-De
    .And I want to spend the rest of my life with you......

    Dedicated to: "Chocolate" ;)
     
  2. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow...I like this one...sweet...
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really like this girl! great flow!
     
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    wow..this is a lovely flow
    Peace
     
  5. ASHANTA

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    Truth speaks in the beat of the pen.
     
  6. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sweet so sweet so sweet this is beautiful girl I really really like this oops I'm startin to repeat myself this how it gets when the flow is TYTE!!! much luv
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :wave:

    This is a beautiful piece!! Great flow!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everybody:grouphug: lol serenti :heart: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  9. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...I feel the passion behind this :)

    1luv
     
  10. Shango

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    Yeah SwtT this is really a lovely piece