Black Poetry : lifes waves are still rolling....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Aug 9, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as life moves forward
    as life goes on
    its waves are still rolling
    its stream still flows
    into that greater picture
    into that larger river
    as that pebble glides on lifes bottom
    so do i
    its current used 2 clear my soul of all worry
    at high tide
    and whens its low.... so am i
    i'm
    yearning for life's thirst
    and cleasing embrace
    searching and waiting for its assistance today
    for it to guide me to the right place
    without it id shrivel dry and die
    cuz lifes ocean waves keep me alive
    in and out to sea it goes
    from shore to shore it flows
    coast to coast
    giving us all hope and strength
    we all ride
    of the many waves
    life's ocean has
    riding
    waiting
    for our ending day
    where the lifes waters stop reaching the earths
    hands full of sand
    but til then it will continue to do
    the same fo me as fo u...
    feeding me
    keeping my soul speaking
    my heart yearning
    hoping
    and my mind working
    learning
    to ride lifes waves that keep rolling in.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sho nuff on point love this piece here flow on wow!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin ya style...on point indeed
    posed well!!!!!....Angel
     
  4. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaaaaaawwww... thankx.. and to think i wasnt bout to post this...
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    glad you did share it..
    life...like the waters ever shifting, rolling , continuing.\
    thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    life's classics return to view.....sis i feel u still here .
     
  7. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    appreciate it rich

    i appreciate bringing this one back around

    its amazing to read "old" words.. past sentiments
    how vidid memories come alive just with script
    and how memories become reality..repeated...

    thanks,
    and yes im still here..
    in 2008
     
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    Sister daroc!
    Im glad Brother Rich brought this one back around because I hadnt got a chance to read the first time through :)
    The imagery in this piece hit close to my heart me being an island lady lol
    I thought the imagery was very well done. I enjoyed it much sister and im glad to see you back home :) :read:
     
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    daroc
    The best part of life is " yearning for life's thirst "
    This is a great flow.. I am glad it was bounced to the front
     
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    loved the river in this...

    as wave after wave carry with them the stuff of life.

    let the river flow
     
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