Black Poetry : Lifes Enraged Mechanism

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, May 2, 2007.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I speak about guns inflamed you can pick them out
    Like a lord of war my main purpose is push them out/
    Deranged young children have a thirst for sprite
    But the blood diamonds pave floors, so what’s the fuss about????
    Blacks killing blacks, what war? Whites picked us out
    We never saw boats until they handcuffed and shipped us out/
    Manipulation is a pulp fiction investigation
    Stereotypes contradict there off scene intimidation/
    While others saturate there life with contemplations
    I’m overlapping your skills with gratification/
    Tensely cutting life short like clinical sutures
    This is reality masked face teachings from tutors/
    For some it’s so hard to erase the hatred
    Or is it there knack for taking, sweat perspiration/
    I’m my own die-hard a Bruce Willis of sorts
    Plain faced conspiracy kill the Bushes like pork/
    This is a revolution that can rip a young brother’s contusion
    Which lane are you driving focused on prosecution/
    Like street hookers living daylights prostitution
    Take a proper step towards resurrection and clear your confusion/
    Like Jerry Springer brawls how much has your life stalled
    Are you worth more than life’s Enraged Mechanism?
    The choice is yours……

    But before you get stuck in a part time blurb
    Realize everything isn't abundant in your suburbs/
    Thinking you can change the planets atmosphere
    With your milion man marches like cartoon planteers/

    Clear Your Vision........
     
  2. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Sirrrrrr!!! This was hot...i mean is hot....Bruh man, strong voice you displayed here.
    Keep teaching Brother. I bid you Peace, power and Prosperity.
     
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    YOUNG GUN

    Hey baby brother,

    Smother them with that truth serum

    They'll be alright, PEACE :time:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen on fire as u laiy reality out on da red carpet
    tyte flow Tantrum
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's ashame that tortured lives are rolling out exactly as it's been planned. This was laid to perfection, scribe.
     
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    Tantrum:
    I always enjoy reading you. This was
    really on point.

    Much Luv
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love family
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    how did i miss this?

    man this was fire poet

    glad to see you back

    man this was fire poet

    my mind is clear
     
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