Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweettee29, Nov 23, 2006.
thanks for reading while it was posted hope you liked it
yes indeed u said a mouth full
life has given the breath to live
and surely to die .........wow !!!!
Mmm this is profound and perfect. I'm astounded by the sound and the strenth of this piece. The chorus sections were truly on point and I'm still soaking in that part about sleep awake. Whew Wee!
if we only new how good we have it.
life is priceless
at da sametime death too is priceless
this peom makes u think make people think
people talk they got it bad.how will da dead person say he got it good?
love ya work.
$$RICH$$ , Tha-Emissary, and rapchild whoaaaaa thank ya'll I am so so so glad you felt me here
I don't know how I felt when I wrote it but I knew I wanted to get life out
Thank ya'll again
any time my sweet anytime let it out !
You really put the pen down on this one.
This was truley a delightful read. Such depth and strenghth.
Very nice indeed.
THANK YOU SISTAH LUV, I APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT
Indeed you have given US a second look at life
and all the joy that comes from living
"Just to inhale, and exhale"
It is a wonderful gift.
Very nice flow..keep that ink going
Peace & Love
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