Black Poetry : Lifes Chorus

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  1. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for reading while it was posted hope you liked it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed u said a mouth full
    life has given the breath to live
    and surely to die .........wow !!!!
     
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    Mmm this is profound and perfect. I'm astounded by the sound and the strenth of this piece. The chorus sections were truly on point and I'm still soaking in that part about sleep awake. Whew Wee!
     
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    if we only new how good we have it.
    life is priceless
    at da sametime death too is priceless

    this peom makes u think make people think
    people talk they got it bad.how will da dead person say he got it good?

    love ya work.
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ , Tha-Emissary, and rapchild whoaaaaa thank ya'll I am so so so glad you felt me here
    I don't know how I felt when I wrote it but I knew I wanted to get life out

    Thank ya'll again

    sweettee, love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    any time my sweet anytime let it out !
     
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    sweette:
    You really put the pen down on this one.
    This was truley a delightful read. Such depth and strenghth.
    Very nice indeed.

    Much Luv
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU SISTAH LUV, I APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT

    SWEETTEE, LOVE
     
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    HI sweettee
    Indeed you have given US a second look at life
    and all the joy that comes from living
    "Just to inhale, and exhale"
    It is a wonderful gift.
    Thank you
    Very nice flow..keep that ink going

    Peace & Love
     
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