Black Poetry : Life's a B^&$*........my 1st poem, please respond

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life's a B^&*!
    Everything is so clear n perfect in the beginnin. Everything tucked neatly away in boxes.

    then comes the hardships or should i say ********.people n life decide that they wanna do spring cleanin, but we're not talkin about material things.

    we're talkin about emotional n mental cleanins. emotional because ur feelins need to be aired out so to speak. mental because u dont want to seem or become that way.

    but then u think, hey some of the worlds most famous n smart people were mental.and im sure i cant b that bad, so y not join the others. but being lost, confused, n dont know where to turn or who to turn too isnt gonna help.

    but life's a [email protected] we gotta deal w/it. i know, i know, u say how, when im not even sure of y life's a b****. i mean, we didnt ask for it, it was given to us.

    just remember, when life's a b&*^@, n u dont have a plan of action, dont let a lil b^%$! rule u. u gotta b the baddest b^%$& n do u.

    a B&^%@ not really meanin a person(male/female), but nething thas fu**in w/ ur flow n time.... i.e. an obstacle
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaay Sarcasm 4 Eva :wave:

    ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~

    Thanks for joining us and sharing your flow, very nice.

    Please take a moment and join us in our LIVE VOICE CHAT too !!

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    :court: that was slick, i totally, feel u!
     
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    tyte flow well felt
    welcome to destee's poetry playground
    keep da ink droppin'
     
  5. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    thanx for all the compliments.........{shyly takin a bow} i got lots of other stuff ive written too.ive been an observer of this site until today, n really lovin all the work y'all share.
     
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    WELCOME TO DESTEE SCRIBE ...

    XPRESS YO SELF, AND BE YO SELF...
    YOU ARE WELCOME IN THIS PLACE...:D
    EXPLORE YOUR MIND AND IN TIME YOU WILL FIND
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    indeed ya wordz felt within
    scribe on we listening
     
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    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tell it like it is i totally agree
     
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