Black Poetry : Lifelong Song

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    they talked for hours
    without sharing a bed
    without her giving head
    without him thinking about it
    she wondered why
    without giving a sh*t
    it was it,
    they shared real moments
    of honesty and truth
    moments dipped and dripped
    in honey syrup thick
    he never anticipated licking lips
    they shared moments
    and wine sweet and words
    while ideas spread to her thighs
    no longer hidden by eyes obtuse
    and inhibitions loose off goose
    she fell into him
    and he carried her away
    on vocal intonations
    grunting tomorrows and forevers
    she knew him
    his soul his arms
    strong hold
    smiling at how life unfolds
    later, prancing on the real
    how honest we felt
    after getting to know him
    after letting his words drop
    dime on her time and mind
    his voice resonated
    wishing belonging
    lifelonging
    song
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Oh to have such a "lifelong song!"


    FABULOUSLY written! My emotions and my imagination ran away with me! :)



    *I think you're gettin' your groove back!* :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da realness of love and cares on a sea sail abound, this was a great read
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Call me stella:qqb015:
     
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    melting into the moment...

    that north and south went...in the same direction. and center mass went...in a never-ending circle ... of ... love.
     
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    Hello Randee...

    Aight Stella, you gots us all in the groove with you!

    Loved the flow!

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    First three messages are excellent.

    Sister Stella, thank you for this.

    One,
    - Ikoro
     
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