Black Poetry : Life

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    All the fully sworn sun
    Born to exhibit energy
    Giving force creating heat
    Being the pit put in
    As the son looked upon safely
    To understand
    Nights turn around
    The sundown town is now
    Yet to be light again
    Get inside
    Sun turns fully white
    The last tonights matter a factly
    My first 24 hours
    Did shine natural light if not heat rays
    What our daily layout shall be because
    Everyday not being the same energy
    Coming to the hood during darkness has become a daily controversy.

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    To Gloat
    Or
    Not to Boast
    To judge a frame
    Drew by Bougie
    The interlockings
    Americans
    Needing to stay
    Yet in a mindful escape
    Landscape flat
    Dumped by mankind
    Dots are illusions
    Made famous by architects
    Going up
    Lines to be made standing still
    Tested by never forseen
    As another artist tears down
    Architecture once fathomed to be
    Now no more
    Boasting for a new tomorrow
    Drawn just today.
     
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    Love it!!!
     
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    Hi Sister candeesweet ... :wave: :wave: :swings: :wave: :wave:

    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY ... :love:

    Beautiful ... Thank You!

    Much Much Love and Peace.

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