Poetry Critiques : Life?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlakDestiny, Oct 16, 2005.

  1. BlakDestiny

    BlakDestiny Member MEMBER

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    Is it personal
    An individual thing?

    Or is it an illusion
    No end or beginning

    When you lose the will
    To participate
    When you feel minimum love
    And maximum hate

    And…when hope returns
    How is life earned?

    What is real, what is true?
    Do you return to life?
    Or does life return to you?


    PL
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was outstanding and deep question

    on life and who what and where i love it
    A+ flow don't change one word awesome
    poet !!!!!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    above all guard your heart for out of it flows the issues of life.... been feeling this completely lately... It's a lost feeling.... but it you don't return you you don't return to hope. Hope is hard to kill. You need hope to stay chill. Nah whatta mean? So anywayz. I liked this because it was simple and straight to the point. Blessings
     
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