Black Poetry : Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Eisha, Oct 1, 2004.

  1. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With a opened mind and a closed view, what is sister like me suppose to do?
    Have a loving soul and a pure heart, my views on life is never apart.

    I know what I want to do, I know now how to get there, the ideas are all clear.
    Relationships can always wait, still young and energetic to see the world than to date.

    Still looking though never stop having fun, the adventure aint over nowhere close to done.
    My eyes beg to see more, going through and experiencing things i've never seen before.

    Starting to grow my roots and spread them around, this young adult is journey bound.
    Give me enough sunlight and i will grow gracefully, my leaves and its inner soul rise beautifully.
    Give me enough water and my life will be quenched, then my open mind will be convinced.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh beautiful young one,
    What a awesome mindset, and yes the "sunlight and Water" is there for you...as much as you want and need. This piece warms my heart and please know that we're all here with our "hoses" to supply the water you need...to sprout.
    Your spirit is soaring...I like that.
     
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    Your sound mind and nourishing heart imparts wisdom.

    Thank you!
     
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    Eisha this was beautifully written .... your thoughts flow with a genlteness
    that open my eyes to the Rose that is you..yes..Please do flow on...

    Love to you young Warrior :hearts2:
     
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    girl you did your thing with this one. This was very beautifully written and you deserve so many props for this :)
     
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    Seems like you're on your way, with a level head on your shoulders. I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree....Enjoyed the flow.
     
  7. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Thank you everyone for all the love. This particular one was written from the soul. :heart:
     
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    Welcome back home!!!! very wonderful and powerful flow
    soar my lil sis just soar bloom like never be for....
    love ya style.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop happy to feel ya flow again
     
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    You're well on your way.

    Keep the mental open 2 learn things new & your life will be full of beauty.

    Nice.
     
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