Black Poetry : LIFE

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  1. jdj530

    jdj530 Active Member MEMBER

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    I put this new entry into my journal to tell the young folks that's doing things that's very inappropriate for the young children, cause life is hard, cause sometimes no one will be there to pick you up if you was down...So I'm trying to touch you now and get that stealing, drug dealing, having babies, and drinking out of your precious heads so you can live freely, reborn, safe and secure, also to know that you're doing great, stay spirited and alive, cause if you do all of those things like drugs and stuff you'll never know either today or tomorrow you might die, it might be your last day to thank your mother and father for helping you when youu was down...Life is not easy...it's hard, but you just have to know how to deal with life...Also, life is not always fair cause you might have a friend that is a backstabber or a man that abuse you even though you did alot for him, and one more thing life isn't unfair either, cause it's just how you deal with life not how you use life, or kill life...If that's not life then I don't know what it is, but to me this is how life is for me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    life can be nasty & rough but it's how u live in it
    nice piece for the young mentals .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely posed
     
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    this is indeed
    a wonderful scribe
    you compose
    :grouphug:
    eyes wide open
    much Peace and Love
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    TRU..

    NICE FLOW...
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    life is about choices... good and bad

    and it looks like you've made some good ones.

    continue your mission... educate&elevate

    great entry!

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    life is many things to many people...
    thanks for sharing what it is to you...

    enjoyed the read!
     
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    jdj530 Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everyone who liked my new entry.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey deer i like, i like, love this its off the hook!
    -cheers,
    your friend,
    the Big Bad Wolf:grin:
     
  10. jdj530

    jdj530 Active Member MEMBER

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    :teach: thank you cause it's teaching u a lesson the_story
     
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