Black Poetry : Life/Love

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life is hard and Love is even harder,
    Learning about Life and Love but I don't feel any smarter!
    Life changes it's tunes before you can blink an eye,
    Love brings pain like rain through heart broken sky's!

    Life Is...........
    Footsteps in the sand
    Woman and man
    God's helping hand in the conception plan
    Black, white, Hispanic and people from the Asian land.
    First steps
    First tears
    First joys
    First fears

    Life is like.........
    A Box Of Chocolates
    A Movie
    A TV Show
    A Play

    Life is like...........
    A Song
    A Book
    A Night
    A Day

    Love Is..............
    Thoughts Of You when your miles apart
    Allowing to share a place in your heart
    Touching a soul without words
    Taking the good from the bad when life throws you a curve.
    Long Hugs
    Sweet Kisses
    Valentines Day
    You becoming my Miss's

    Love is like..........
    Wearing your mans shirt when he is away
    Touching you woman when things aint OK
    Long hot baths just before the arrival
    Giving your last for the kids survival

    Love is like...........
    Words without definition so u just hold their hand
    Gods grace, tranquility and giving his son for the dammed
    Home cooked meals after a long days work
    Knowing and caring when the other is hurt

    Love is like............
    Why does this emptiness feel so bad?
    The best friendship u ever had
    Mom making things work in the house without no dad
    Brothers stepping up and being a father to their daughter or lad.

    Life & Love are the same for they both at time come to an end
    But Love outlast life within the memories of family and friend.
    I guess love gave me life before life gave me love
    But if you have love in your life then keep it real snug.

    Life showed me at time we will be alone
    Love showed me a House is not a home
    .........................................................................Without someone to share it with.

    "Caramelpython"​
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...this was so beautiful :spinstar:
    Like the sun breaking through dark clouds after the rain...
    Wow...I loved it, what a way to start the morning...With beautiful poetry...

    Thanks for being my sunshine today :sand:

    and that one line...I guess love gave me life before life gave me love "Brilliant" :spinstar:

    Wonderful Peace, Sage
     
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    beautiful scribe....
    i guess we all think of this at times
    and you laid it so well
    thank you for sharing with us....
    you got that poetic suit
    and wearing it well
    Love ya
    Angel :blush:
     
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    I agree with MzBlk and Sage, what a beautiful way to start the morning... :wave:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage:
    My sister thanks 4 such kind words. :)
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel:
    :tongue: I must of just gotten it out the cleaners because it was gone 4 a min..lol :laugh: :lol: :laugh: :lol:
    Thanks angel :teach: "I do what I can do when I can do it" :wink:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jazzymoonchild:
    Glad I could give a lil somthing somthing to my family :) Now all I need is some :coffee: so I dont :boring: LOLBut thanks 4 real for the love up in here :blush:
     
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    Python...
    stop ducking... :laugh: I don't have my hammer right now because I'm reloading :wink: ...just in case.

    On the real, this was above the level of being awesome. And it's funny but life and love supplies the tools...how we use them, is up to us, remember...love and life are two things you wear "outside of yourself" ...
    this poem was so "mind blowing" ...luv u Snake :)
     
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    well trust you wear it well..... :grouphug: do ya thang...ya always got my support
     
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    Python

    WoW...this was beautiful. You are a beautiful brother and your words have touched my soul. Thank you for this piece, it has helped to brightned my day. :)
     
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