Black Poetry : Life Is Good(Dedicated To J'hiah)

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    with each and every passing moment
    life is good

    the skies are pacific blue
    beautiful as the ocean
    its secret potion
    floating among the heavenly
    skies my eyes glow in feelings of joy

    like a little boy with his brand new
    toy
    yes, life is good

    the wind blows beneath the trees
    making me wonder
    putting me at ease
    its beautiful green leaves
    bringing visions of summer

    smiling for it gives me imagery
    of rides in a hummer and
    life is good

    songs of heartbreak
    playing its magical tune
    doesn't even phase me
    somehow i'm immune

    sounds of pure delight
    while i float
    gliding on cloud nine
    passing thoughts going
    through my head
    everything is fine

    and life is good


    apt copyright all rights reserved 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel

    the joy bound up in every line of this "peace".....

    beautiful! thank you for sharing this special dedication with us, PoeticDEE! :)

    a
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quite nyce, dear poetess. i'm lovin' it!
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    thank you alyce and lister

    much love


    pd
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    even better than before.....

    thanx poetic delight...
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    forever will i show love..... :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THIS WAS TYGHT

    SWEET AND WELL SAID .....FLOW ON AS U DO!:heart: :toast:
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd...these words paint a peacefully sweet picture...
    the mental images were great...

    K
     
  10. poeticdelight

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    thank you Rich and Kitana

    it's all love :) :heart:
     
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