Black Poetry : Life...Interrupted

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  1. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life interrupted
     
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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    tyte drop well felt look to read more as u share
     
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    Nice lil peice here...i too felt like that many years ago...i feels u...scribe on...and welcome to destee son..peace
     
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    "Living in the microwave era
    Where gratification is frowned upon
    If it is not instant"

    Those lines were creatively potent poet. In fact I could feel the ache in this entire piece. Many have been in this space, and we do come out of it in time. Welcome to Destee, make yourself at home.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    welcome to destee...and thanks for bringing your creative energy..
    i could feel your emotions in this piece...
    a blessing isn't it...to have a way to release them..
    keep flowing..
     
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    Thanx for appreciating the piece for what it is.
     
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    It's hard to see our brothers so empty and hurt from love. Often times too hurt to risk their hearts again. The shortage might not be due to the dying off, it might be because of broken hearts. I hope your soul mends soon. Nice write. I look forward to more.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for all the love
     
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    Another nice write from u bigdrizzle. It's funny how our mind turns things around. If she couldn't appreciate the depths of your soul, she is really "yesterdays trash". :toast:
     
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    Feelin' this because its right!

    Persevere poet.
     
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