Black Poetry : life in the moment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jul 7, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't freestyle
    cause my wit aint strong enough
    i think alot
    perhaps I havent lived long to trust
    but yet,y heart feels like it must
    its yearnin for depth
    to dig deep and puncture me
    leave holes of unforgotten love
    with in me
    but my wisdom
    and love
    aint strong enof
    the length of my discipline dont stretch long enof
    sometimes its so hard 2 let go
    got my dungeon gaurded by my soul
    and to think im searchin
    yearnin
    for so much
    too much
    hope
    love... all things jus
    and im only 18
    but im missin this love thing
    like a fein
    and this chapter begun seconds ago
    and my life got all time given to grow
    and so does my mind...
    my love...
    my flow...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's a lotta wisdom in this, sweetie, and I really respect that. I do think you're strong enough, so you just keep on keepin on. I dig your flows mucho, brothah.
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx.... but ima sistah..lol
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My profound apologies, sistah. I hope my error doesn't detract from the admiration I have for your piece.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe...
    really enjoyed it
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no biggie.. thanx
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista, Daroc

    You may be young, but you are talented and growing every day. Remember that. :look:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This felt like this was freestyle....was it? Just flow the way you know, we're all diggin it. Ages and stages, we all continue to grow.
     
  9. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey thanks yall gor som much love in here...
    oh, and yeah it was a free... some body started me off and i jsu ran wit it...
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice daroc keep dropping but meanwhile let me drop this punchline

    Cats won’t get to the market fast even with carpet grass
    You can’t walk soft or talk boss not my fault you’re a false a-ss
    Even with electronic device couldn’t spit Ebonics nice through
    microphones
     
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