Quiet Poetry Lounge : Life in Me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CreativeExpress, Mar 8, 2004.

  1. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    I feel the flutter, that is your sweet movement. I clutch my prize eagerly awaiting it's arrival into the world. How did I get here? How have we never met and yet we are in love. You press yourself against my soul and fill me with an anticipation like I've never knew. Yes, you the tiny jewel no bigger than my shoe, making my resistance in keeping you all through. I feel a tickle, as if you are playing a melodious tune on the cages of my heart. When will i see you? Hold you? Play with your skin? What will you be? How will you grow? Little life in me, what will you learn and come to know? Will you have your daddy's eyes, his laugh, but my smile? Precious gem that grows, will I miss in my belly, when you make your grand entry? Sweet, precious, unborn child of mine will you like the life given to you? Will you be famous or plain, normal or insane? The worries of your future grips me like a vice. Joyous is your imminent arrival, as fresh as the dawn. And no matter how I wonder, how I worry, how I nag, My love for you will only grow, live, and carry on.... :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done i feel u on dis
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i think at one point we all worry and wonder
    and until they are 18 you gonna worry and wonder
    then after all grown we will
    as loving parents its a thang we go through...
    we we love are kids
    enjoyed this read
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    It is an endless love indeed, you posed this so beautifully.
     
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