Black Poetry : Life in a nursery rhyme (the end)

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  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life in a nursery rhyme (the end

    all around the neighborhood

    the police chased the crackhead

    the crackhead thought it was a joke

    "BOOM"

    goes the crack house

    AND!!!!!!

    the eeney weeney black boy
    went out the door to play

    along comes the police
    and blew the boy away

    out comes the judges
    and throws the case away

    and the crooked cops
    smiled and called it

    "just another day"
     
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    Whisper........This was loud and Kleer......This is the first time I've read you.....Oh! I'm Sorry poets don't read poetry...WE HEAR IT!!!!

    And I heard this one fo'sho!! Nice allegory without all the tricks!

    One Love......and "Nuff Respect to ya mon"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i felt ya wordz tyte scribe
     
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    back to the top
     
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    Now, this was the work of a craftsman, or is it a craftswoman? Anywho, some children do see these things happen as much as others enjoy nursery rhymes....smh. On point whisper, where ever you are.
     
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    whoa...that's all I can say...
    this hit hard...
    but the truth always does...
     
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    tight piece

    I agree with angelicsage - hard to read, but straight up on the real. Wow.
     
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