Black Poetry : Life and a beautiful Black Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poeticvibez, Apr 12, 2005.

  1. Poeticvibez

    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    Imamu Amari Baraka I think said it best
    Blessed is the beautiful black women
    I want you to answer me like Nikki Giovanni
    I want to be your beautiful black man
    Gwendolyn Brooks once told me a love story
    Said you had forgotten me well
    Well i hope there never comes a day when you have forgotten sunday
    My Juliet run away w/ me
    An we become one under shadow of the night
    And In an Intimate moment I want to share my rib with you
    I feel like the richest man in Babylon
    My cleopatra I want to be your Caesar and please you
    I want to be your Anthony run away with me
    My lips connect with your flesh as i kiss you on the left side of the back of your neck
    My Eccentric Electric Afro centric Black Queen
    I need you to be my Nefertiti
    Rule my egypt with me
    Your love is my Armana Revolution
    Run away with me
    Fly away with me
    Can we meet on the day that the birds choose their mates
    when the 14th fell on the 24th
    You are my hearts Delilah
    any thing else feels impure to me
    Stand here with me in this perfect circle with our backs to these Philistines
    My Aphrodite's I am your Aries
    Let me stele you from the grips of the world
    I want to be the reflection in your pupils when i stare into your face
    Run away with me to a place where only lovers know
    Let me be the reason why your seasons change
    With my eyes closed I enter your temple and you bless me with knowledge, strength, and substance
    Help me start a nation
    Patient beauty
    reign with me till this life gets tired
    Life and A Beautiful black women
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop love the flava here

    NOTE you have five pieces to the front so use some of that
    high energy and share some love on the other poet's work !
    do visit our Poetic Etiquette Rules above the forum at
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=11896

    yo pen is on fire ......love it
     
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    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew...

    With all of this swetness and love I don't think life would get tired with you! Beautiful poem poet, this one made me think. Keep em' coming!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed regally like the heart of a Nubian king expressing his love for his nubian queen. Awesome flow brotha.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to destee.com

    Thank you for sharing.
     
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    Poeticvibez Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    Thanx for the luv every1 just honoring those that deserve it.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Show your love.

    Poeticvibez, we appreciate you and the wonderful poetry that you are contributing. This message is to ask that you not judge who is worthy of love in the way that you respond to other family members, but to reciprocate by offering encouragement. After all, at some point in time someone must have encouraged you. I trust that you will not take this the wrong way and understand where I am coming from. Keep up the great work and freely show your love. :blowkiss:
     
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    Phenomenal work of art!
    Creatively put together!
    with flawless connections
    between timeless love stories
    All I can say...is that
    I hope you write more...

    ENCORE

    :bowdown:
     
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    Love at it's finest...Blak.

    Usually don't rock the love pieces, but when it's lifting our sisters, I can't ignore it.

    Nice.
     
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