Black Poetry : Lies....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, May 17, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    In a mirror of Miss libertylaida's poem "Truth"...

    Know what they say...
    The lie is sweeter
    Sometimes you protect emotions
    By acting like you're not a cheater

    "The truth will come to the light"
    Fu*k it..by then I'll be gone
    If he couldn't figure it out
    He deserves to be alone

    But the truth hurts
    It hurt like all he*ll
    Why make someone cry?
    Hide it away.."Oh, well"
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    one who pose self as a cheat
    is the digger of da weak
    lies cast justice undone
    truth spoken
    let it be as it's written
    who in da hell are we kidding
    his lost
    from the destructional lies
    but yet silent cries
    will dry , dis no lie
    love will strike again
    to mend da broken sin

    tyte vibe
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Dec 15, 2002
    Messages:
    3,299
    Likes Received:
    182
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Economist
    Location:
    Detroit, MI
    Home Page:
    Ratings:
    +236
    Nice...very nice...the both of you.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
  4. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2003
    Messages:
    9,146
    Likes Received:
    1,097
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +1,102
    nice scribe swtT
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Singapore
    Joined:
    May 13, 2003
    Messages:
    6,477
    Likes Received:
    110
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Servant of the People
    Location:
    Bay Area, CA
    Ratings:
    +131
    SwT you so skilled gurrrl :) lol :)
     
  6. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 8, 2003
    Messages:
    2,752
    Likes Received:
    28
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Educational/Human Resources field
    Location:
    Chicago, IL
    Ratings:
    +28
    trniti :D you jus brining up alll the old poems :) thank u gurl :D
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,322
    Likes Received:
    38
    Location:
    ~The hidden library...~
    Ratings:
    +39
    Yes the lie is sweeter, but nothing hurts deeper.
    It's tastes good but it feels bad going down.

    Feeling your flow, definitely!
    Angelicsage
     
  8. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Oct 24, 2002
    Messages:
    363
    Likes Received:
    5
    Location:
    With the thunder gods
    Ratings:
    +6
    short ,to the point , great
     
  9. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 17, 2003
    Messages:
    285
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    My occupation is whatever I do that requires focus
    Location:
    Spokane, Washington
    Ratings:
    +3
    I know a whole heap of brothas that need to take heed to your POWERFUL wordz

    One love sista
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    That was tyte and real SwtT. You have a lot of talent.
     
Loading...