Black Poetry : lies via telephone

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  1. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lies via telephone

    i sit there patiently as you explain your story to me
    of what had happened,
    to me
    and whut had happened was..........
    it seem to be unbelievable
    like a someone spotting a giant telling a tall tell in neverland
    how much do u believe?
    you tell me tales of heartache
    sadness, loss to which i want to believe
    to some extent, then again for your sake and you sanity
    i wish not to believe.
    my mind traveling many mile stones
    walking a mile and back, so silence becomes me
    as my words shy towards the back of my thoughts, to which my
    voice becomes unheard.
    you ask me whut it is i am thinking of
    and in a quick reply i say Christmas,
    then look towards the brightly lit
    Christmas tree, thinking of the angels we trap behind glass,
    that lights up our hopes and dreams on an evergreen Christmas tree
    tha angels that we deny the freedom to be
    . so to bring us Christmas glee
    to the worlds that hang like ornaments around them to keep them company
    you continue to fill my head up with lies,
    things that have to be unthinkable or untrue
    at least in my mind for your sake i hope they are fibs far from the truth, but
    who am i to deny truth?
    the strangled silence between us tells an awful truth that
    we have indeed grown apart. but instead
    we deny this inclination and continue to fake friendliness and laughter.
    you on a quest for knowledge on a road to discovery
    maybe of who we really are, and i,
    digging pot holes, and traps to keep things the way they are.
    answering your questions with i don't kno, or somethin confusing, to run you off track
    muttering lies, thorough this lowly receiver, hoping you don't pull my card
    and thinking maybe through the wire on your side of town
    your hoping the same thing
    you telling stories im not quick to believe
    and askin questions im not quick to answer
    for truths im not ready to kno, so i answer whut u want to hear,
    and ask nothing even close.
    feeling somehow trapped behind the comfort of my lies,
    trapped behind tha glass
    as if placed on a display, with a lime light or possible red or green...
    trying to escape if only i could,
    but wanting for u , to bring
    hope joy and glee at all tha same time....
    but i sit there with this phone in hand, ready to receive your lies
    So on my side of the phone, laughing at ya horrible lying skills,
    and possibly on the other side you cry



    lately my minds been wandering but i've been to far behind to catch up so excuse me if i've lost my train of thought because im still back here lookin for the keys* meaning sorry if i confused u *
     
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    very well done
     
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    you did a fine job passion flow on gurl!!!!!!!!!:star:
     
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    trapped lost in lies
    nicely put poet
    keep focusing sweetie
     
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    Hard to keep up with those lies after a while, wonder how he'll feel when all the lies finally fall on deaf ears. Liked the way you flowed with this.
     
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