Black Poetry : LIES,LIAR

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  1. CasualFriday

    CasualFriday Member MEMBER

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    LIES, LIES, LIES
    LIAR, LIAR, LIAR
    LIES about who you are
    LIES about what you do
    LIES about the source of your very being

    LIAR, LIAR, LIAR
    LIES, LIES, LIES
    Said you had a job, LIAR
    Said you went to school, LIAR
    Said you were a strong black man, LIAR

    LIES, LIES, LIES
    LIAR, LIAR, LIAR
    LIES about your future
    LIES about our future
    LIES about the source of your very being

    LIAR, LIAR, LIAR
    LIES, LIES, LIES
    Said you had no kids, LIAR
    Said you were single, LIAR
    Said you were a strong black man, LIAR

    LIES, LIES, LIES
    LIAR, LIAR, LIAR
    LIES about where you been
    LIES about what time you'll be in
    LIES about the source of your very being

    LIAR, LIAR, LIAR
    LIES, LIES, LIES
    Said you needed me, LIAR
    Said you missed me, LIAR
    Said you were a strong black man, LIAR

    Your LIES LIAR have made the source of your strength weak
    Your LIES LIAR say you aren't a strong black man
    Your LIES LIAR have shattered your future
    Your LIES LIAR have shattered our future

    With your LIES LIAR you hurt me.
    With your LIES LIAR you betrayed me
    With your LIES LIAR you tore our friendship to shreds
    With your LIES LIAR you made me question......... why I love you

    LIAR, LIAR, LIAR
    LIES, LIES, LIES
    Said you would never hurt me, LIAR
    Said you would never betray me, LIAR
    Said you cherished me and our friendship, LIAR
    Said you loved me, LIAR

    Your LIES LIAR have made it impossible for you to tell the truth...
    About who you are
    About what you are
    About what you might be
    Cause all you know are LIES LIAR
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    under lies of a liar of a false heart leaves zero
    get ya self a hero , i hear ya ! lies of betrayal
    can kill any hope
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some folks lie so much, I think it starts making them feel high or something. And in a relationship, that's surely the worst. Posed right on point.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece left me shaking my head poet only thing I can say is LIAR lol. :jump:
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang..whoever this poem was about..made your claws come out..lyrically...goodness..*trying to contain self*..maybe he shoulda been in that movie Liar Liar instead of Jim Carrey...nice peice...woo...
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Devil, don't go there...

    Loving this strong poem, poet.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The "truth" ...can be turned, upside down, inside out...and it's still just the "truth"
    but...
    A "lie", has a thousand faces...and counting, a lying person, is a very dangerous person, stay clear of them.
    I like your work of art, and that's the "truth"
     
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