Black Poetry : lie to me, girl!

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lie to me girl.
    tell me all the good in me you see
    when you really see me as filthy.
    tell me how life is so much better with me
    while inside you know it’s actually worse.
    lie to me.
    tell me that there is a brighter day if i can just hold on.
    don’t share with me that inwardly you know it would be easier for you if i would just give up, give in, and bring my mortality to an end.
    lie to me.
    please girl! don’t tell me how much really hate me.
    lead me to believe you love my stinky drawers.
    don’t reveal to me that i repulse you with each touch
    keep loving me and laying me in false ecstasy
    void of your emotional heart.
    please, please, please! just lie to me!
    tell me again that i’m good
    when you really think i’m bad.
    sit with me. laugh and laugh again.
    don’t tell me how you cry inside because you made and eternal commitment to a dead head brother like me.
    lie to me ‘cause i can’t handle the truth.
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aiight Kla

    This was ah, this was ah....interesting to say the least!!!

    But I dug it just the same bro!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright brother!

    i like this one...
    isn't it funny that we'd rather live with lies than die with truth?
    keep the quill wet!
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so glad you brought this

    it says so much all in between and over top and underneath the lines. And I learn so much from insightful responses as well...like what my sista Danilyn just said

    "..rather live with lies than die with truth"

    A sista is listening and learning

    thank you for provoking thought all over the place


    T
     
  5. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FAM.

    GQ - it was a flip of the coin between truth a reality.

    DANILYN - the truth does hurt. lies and fables are more easily lived. but of course as those in the spirit we must seek truth - regardless.

    T - nice to meet you. glad this piece moved you - inside - ! love the signature block! we used to sing fred/radical in my church for praise and worship!

    again thanks FAM.
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No Doubt!!!

    I feel ya Kla!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    On point my brutha

    ****!
    Truth
    excuse me as I seek...
    Tyte Piece Poet!
    Much love:)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Madd Sistahly Love

    SPOKEN! This piece goes deep, deep, deep into so many (wo)men's reality.

    Poetically Turn'd Out
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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