Black Poetry : Lick the Splits

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A pro' with sex
    Miss was the best
    She held their ****
    Even took some hits
    She licked the splits
    Rolled the blunt
    Stayed on a hunt
    Bought crack from jack
    Now her brain went "Splat"
    She licked the splits
    Pinched the tips
    Lit the lighter
    Flame got higher
    Mind just soarin'
    While the rain started pourin
    Children thought she was snorin
    Things got borin
    She licked the splits
    Licked
    She tipped the bit took a sniff
    Got high off spliff
    Coulda fell from a cliff
    She licked the splits
    Life turned to mess
    She lifted her dress
    Gave up her life
    Just to get high
    Turned down the radio
    Talib,"Just To Get By."
    "Yaw don't know my struggle."
    Steady yellin' why she hustle
    She licked the splits
    Took a whiff of the ****
    Her body couldn't handle it
    She licked the splits
    Splits
    Slits
    Drips
    Brain on cocaine
    Even in the rain......
    She licked the splits
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    but please review
    Poetic Etiquette
    i have removed the words
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh I'm sorry I noticed that after I entered it thank you:wink: :thanks: :peace:
     
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    not a problem just be careful :wink:
     
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    very nice

    that was hot ms. lady. i look forward to reading more.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you beauty :tongue:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    red alert .........whewwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!
     
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    :lol:thanx Rich
     
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