Black Poetry : Levels of LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 26, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk of this thing called love. :love: Rarely fits everyone like a suede glove. Holding them tight and taking away their cares and sorrow. Folks speak of, and write of this love like it is never ending. Gracing over some and then there are those pretending. To be in love. It's only infatuation. So you must know the signs.

    Do you get excited when you see their face?

    Does their voice make your blood and heart race?

    Does every day seem like a new?

    Then love probably has a hold on you.
    Even if you don't have these levels.
    Love comes cloaked and brushes like a feather.
    Subtle love is like a birds feather hitting your face.

    Doesn't mean your not gonna run it's race.
    Love has a way of making you stick together.
    Abuse, hardship, and all's kind of weather.

    Regardless of your station on this.

    Tell me isn't love just the bliss.

    I wouldn't trade it for all the gold.
    That Africa the mother land does behold.
    But some of richness comes into play.
    Cause love true love is here to stay.

    Now have fun.
     
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    wow...Thanks for writing this. I loved the spin on the "love poem". Very intriguing write. :heart:
     
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    awesome twist of love u pose to da faces
    man off da hook here wow! have fun indeed
     
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    Love has all different levels..so amazing..you can be in love..or just love that person..such a difference...love is like summer winter spring fall....Flow on I enjoyed this peice..
     
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    So many levels of love, yes it's true. Sometimes giddy like a kid, sometimes painfully serious. Such truth in this flow poet.
     
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    Cleanly dropped and further proof I have never been in love (lol)
    Peace, this is a nice one.
     
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    fun!!!! yes indeed
    loved this twist many levels it do indeed
    thanks for sharing this on...
    flow head on ya pen on fire..
     
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    So so True...

    Love and it's levels...

    You captured this so effortlessly

    Very insightful scribe...

    "Love does come cloaked"...that was a brilliant line!



    Paying it forward...~~Sage~~
     
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    Love definitely has a hold on you, Brother Hodee and I ain't mad at'cha. Made me smile this Friday morning
     
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    Hodee the hopeless romantic :)
    :heart: and he strikes again :)
    say that hodee bear...say that :)
     
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