Black Poetry : Letting It Go

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Mar 30, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got this hump in my back from a long days work
    A needle in my foot and it sure as hell hurts
    A lump in my throat from the words I'm afraid to say
    A curse word after all your lies because I dont need you anyway.
    Another day another lifetime I bloom like a flower
    Not trapped by this hotness of a once cold shower
    You can't use your power
    I've over come like a slave in "Missipi"
    Not crying or being tortured like a purple Mrs.Ceily
    All the trauma in the world may hold us you me we down
    But it isn't enough to make me wish I could die and hold my head down
    Saggin down
    down down
    down
    down to the ground into it seeping
    soaking like fresh water after the storm
    Into the grace of the heavens this feeling it's so warm.
     
  2. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feeling this sensual. This is tight.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    had to let it just BREATHE

    :angel1: thanks a lot it was off the top of my head just thinking
     
  4. watzinaname

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    The title was appropriate, just sounds like you were letting it go, and you did.
     
  5. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes it does now that i think about it thank you so much :peace:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes the flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    wow
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much for diggin my poetry
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very appropiate
    Nice and fitting title(I agree with Watz)
    No drawn out process
    Just letting it go!!(I feel ya)
    Nice one!


    PEACE AND LOVE
     
  10. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: :puke2: maybe i could spit a lil some some else for yaw a lil later
     
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