Black Poetry : letting go

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SPIRITNORTH, Dec 1, 2003.

  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    its been a long road now
    just when i thought there
    were no more words
    more come to mind

    but i think my time is up here
    i've tried to persuade you
    and told you i love you
    but it made no difference

    i've have taken patiently
    your bruises to my ribs
    gave my last breath and tear
    still you have no forgiveness

    and extention of friendship
    but you won't give
    refuse to consent cause anger
    has a place to live
    in you

    so now im thru
    and it pains me so
    but i think imma smile
    after a while
    as i am
    letting go.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write...i likes :angel1:
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice and simple... i like.
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahh wonderful
    a nice release indeed
    nice flow
    Peace
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too sweet love this flow now let go .....wow !
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree totally with brother $$RICH$$, stop all the tears cuz life isn't long enuf 2 have more pain than joy.

    Nice piece.

    Smile.
     
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