Black Poetry : letting go (dome piece)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Apr 29, 2002.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it WAS her
    she crept in and out like a halfback
    makin me feel drained
    vain
    remaining the same as yesteryear
    i requested that she lend me an ear
    let me explain
    but verbalization was not in the gameplan
    for tonights events 'bout to explode'
    with all fear factors contolled
    not saying i don't have a stronghold on GOD
    but your hold is so godamn strong
    i belong to you.
    i give in.
    u win.
    see u again in another lifetime.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hi-wa

    feeling your work poet
    nice touch

    dssNY
     
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    no doubt this was tyte
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ga_Boi...


    ...you talkin' ta me?!! :eek:

    aight! i'm kiddin'... but!! i likes this off da
    dome ****. it's gotta nice flow... but it's
    still in that LoveClass... & you know i be
    diggin' some Love flowz... even the crazy
    variety!! :lol:

    :heart:
    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SEE HI-WA............DIS HERE WAS TO **** TYGHT
    FEELIN DA MOTION AS I TAKE FLYGHT >>>>>>>>
     
  6. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    streets-
    glad u felt this one. sorry for the delayed response, but preciateya once again.

    J-
    glad u could relate.

    GAlady-
    maybe, maybenot. glad u lyk't it anyway.

    rich-
    preciate the read. hope the motion
    helped u ease into space........


    hw
     
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