Black Poetry : letters of commitment

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I embrace your inhale
    With the slightest touch of
    A buttercup under your chin
    Illuminating your divine smile?

    Can I consume your vision with
    Dreams of joy wrapped in layers
    Of peace smothered in thick rich
    Folds of deep dark compassion?

    Will you allow me the chance to
    Wrap your heart in layers of silk
    And lace and place it in a chest
    Built from the desires held within?

    Will you return to me the rib taken
    Whence I was sleep to be molded
    into the virtuous epitome of one who
    fits snugly inside the new found home?

    And can we complete each others
    Walk as we hold hands while you
    inhale the love that I exhale when I
    release a sigh of peace being with you?
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D....


    you write the scribes that make a sista exhale... sssllooow! :)

    this was beautifully done... per usual.


    AlwaysPeace.
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'MY MR ....DNOMMO

    NOW DES BE DA BOMB !!
    SO BLOW IT UPPPPP!!:D
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for the read...i am humbled...
     
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    Thank-you once again for sharing with us those beautiful and delicate thoughts that so often flow from your pen.

    *man-whole*
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you my friend...i am honored by your visit...

    email...
     
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    I sighed after reading this

    Wonderful poem. A sigh of peacefulness released when with someone you love. So beautifully done. This was so absorbed.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the read...i am just going through the emotional rollercoaters of love...it's all good

    i write what i see...i see what i write...
     
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