Black Poetry : Letters ( how could you)

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  1. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    How could you let this happen to me?
    Tear me down reconstructing is not that easy?
    How the hell is it me you never told me there was someone elese.
    What is this? The new problems the endless tears and i lets it happen to me and I never said a word about it.
    I let you in to a place in my world that no one has ever been but how can you do this to me.
    Tell me You want to be with me and this make me cry.
    Why do I sit here at a desk with my pen and my paper writing down my tears.
    I loved you. I still do but i take this i take the unusal for you.
    You tell me that we know whats right and what they say is not true but how can I sit back and listen to this.
    Darling were am I supposed to sit back and here this consantly I love you but how? i DONT KNOW MYSELF ANYMORE .
    tAKE WHAT i LOVE YOU i WOULD DIE FOR YOU. but what the hell is this what can i do this?
    How could you let me cry and pratically laguh in my face?
    To my constant displeasure I feel that things are in the dark and i cant bring thm to life and all of this **** is making my world impolde.

    i hope you get a chance to read this so i can tell you im hating you.
    To be continued
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: WELCOME :wave:

    Enjoyed reading your piece... hope you enjoy all of the comforts of home here...

    Thanks for sharing your scribe (look forward to seeing more) :)


    :wave: N2
     
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    sista gurl sista gurl sista gurl !!!!!

    ummmmm hummmm!!! welcome welcome welcome !!
    to da playground of Destee's place where u can vibe
    and flow in scribe welcome within upon family & friendz
    enjoy ya play please do stay upon us and flow mo!
    welcome from above wit tender love :) :heart: :)
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    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    :wave: Haaaaaaaaay Sista Gurl :wave:

    Thanks for joining us and sharing yo' flow!

    Looking forward to reading more of you!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Flow!!

    Tell me more...:)
     
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    Sista_Gurl...

    Welcome!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you all I have been on afronet before under a differnt screen name Thickgirl I have had time to reflect on life and it has really hit hard thanks for the welcome. I hope you will see that i have grown as a person and you will see more. Thanks for the welcome. Pain is felt often but it is delt with beter on paper. I hope you see my tears and fears and my lost hope in some of my poems. I have gained my character and a fresh new perspective on life. I have seen a lot of thingS. Its good to be back home sorry for the long time away. You know life takes you to funny places and shows you things that you have neverseen before.I look forward to your prasie and thoughts on my work. Home always is the place were you can be yourself and flow. Thanks everyone.
    Sista gURL
     
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