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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    from da night lite
    da paper bag
    and my oily pen

    I scribe the taste
    of what's known
    as break up
    da house where i
    once lived is ram shack
    and the cape of my coat
    is too old
    the hush of flip mouth
    and the looks now
    so few so i race upward
    and now i just give da
    pen and paperbag
    a look and walk away
    their i written a name ...

    before i can finish
    a strong wind blow
    da window spread open
    and like that it's lost
    will i start ova
    will i just be that one
    who continue on
    so many faces
    at one tyme i knew
    everyone of them but i'm not sure
    the body of what we seek is
    no more ..Well not for me
    so i place a wet paper bag
    and a drippin' pen on the
    table and turn away til
    another day
    yet the name i scribe
    is da writting on the wall
    it's almost ova .......:confused:
     
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    da mind in weaved
    in between da reality
    and the myth of it all
    as the pen drips
    the name is scribe
    so bold yet blindly
    not seen within
    the wet paper bag
    again dry to a empty tune
    dis room is tight and dark
    so i lay down and rest.........!!!

    poetic search)))))))
     
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    DA MIND BE WEAVED BETWEEN THE REALITY OF IT ALL AND THE MYTH OF IT ALL .... BEEN DONE THAT AND SURE I BE THERE AGAIN
     
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    INDEED AND AGAIN WE RIDE DA WAVE OF IT ALL
     
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    i like this got a kick to it
    but scary i understand it...
    lol
     
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    it's one from the under world
    it's a story and a life it's fear
    yet hope this mental scribe
    has it all playin in a head
    thankzzzzzzzzzz sistah
     
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    most welcome...
    like i said scary
    coz i understood it
    you go boy
     
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    the art of da hand not done yet
    thankz again my poetic one
     
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    who me.....
    thank you...
    but you are the true poet...
    but since it came from you
    baby thank you is all
    i can say my RICHNESS
     
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    most welcome sistah
     
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