Black Poetry : Letter to my trash Can

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good morning,
    just thought I should just point out that I am so sick of you
    I hate waking up in your arms,
    after a long night of me making love to you
    while you were ****ing me
    taking from me and not giving me
    i need to call the nurse cuz it hurts
    when you say you love me
    but close your eyes and dream of...
    anything but me
    my adversary is you
    I hate you
    I constantly lose the war between my heart and mind
    and allow my spirit center to be invaded by your false prophesies
    don't get me wrong, I ain't mad at you
    I just wish that you were my note pad, my canvas
    whatever, you could be my art
    I would paint a beautiful you
    with me inside
    and you could speak shakespeare to me,
    I hate you
    you can't be prosaic
    too busy being insensate
    and feeling what you say
    not saying what you feel
    my heart's so obtuse
    a lump of density is all it is when it comes to you and your silly ***
    I mean not to imply that I am stupid
    but rather that my mind belongs to me and my heart to you
    and inspite of how I love to hate you
    I much rather hate loving you
    and its so crazy that I am contaminating my mind
    and polluting my paper with these thoughts...
    which belongs in the trash
    with the last two odes I etched
    in the name of you
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx gurrl, this guy just asked me why we stay with guys like that? Good question, I guess its because we know most of them are the same!!
     
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    True, my sentiments exactly...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    They say it's better at home then to bring another one home
    u gotta know some not only have the clue but the answer
    flow on coz i feel ya .....
     
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    Wow!

    A paradox wrapped up in an enigma, swallowed whole by a mystery...with the answer shadowed by ambiguity...and only the third eye can truly see! This was deep ...just like I like em...

    Blessings On Ya House!:cool:
     
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    Thanx Y'all

    hey thanx y'all for the comments. Prec-itate it.
     
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    BRAVO!

    It's a thin line that relationships shove (not push) us over often.

    Your flower is nice Dream Weaver.
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sistah, I think shove is the right word to describe, its alomost like we don't have a choice:x:
     
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    OKAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    CAPTIVATED FROM BEGINING TO END. SUPER TYTE FLOW.
    PEACE!
     
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    The most annoying thing is tho is that this "man" thinks he's doing everything right and can't understand y u get so p*ssed.
    Been there, and finally put him out in the trash where he belonged.

    Loved this peace Dream Weaver.
    Tyte flow.

    *Emma*
     
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