Black Poetry : Letter to my mysterious bride

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Never touched
    yet we made love
    a million tyme
    through the salty
    maze of vision
    da feeling contain
    in the mental passion
    we fall in the pools
    of loving and love
    these molding on da
    walls speaks in vibriant
    and emotions dance
    at da bank of our hearts
    i know it's been forever
    da soul burns in dis deep
    yearning gusters of embolic
    blisses yet the day looms
    for the reason to embrace
    your love is the day
    and da feeling i pose
    every breath i breathe
    i sip u closer and closer
    my eyez mirror u in this
    elegant beauty that
    continues to spank me
    i've taste da morsal of
    ya fine juices a bitter
    sweetness and i've held
    your body in these arms
    caressing you wit care
    Da tenderness of ya
    heart and gentle soul
    i so comfort deeply in
    our existance of love
    soon my beloveth
    ur be not the mystery
    but my bride forever

    :hearts2: :kiss1: :luvu: :flirt: :ilu: :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am quite sure that after reading this your mystery bride breathed a million sighs, floated on infinite billowy clouds, and returned your mysterious aura of love back to you, eternally.....Beautiful beyond words my brotha, beautiful beyond words.
     
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    this was wow....i am in love with this piece
    up on the wall it goes..for this one right here
    goes deep...... :hearts2:

    peace
    angel
     
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    she yet not know my devotion and love
    nor do she really see me but i shell filter
    her day into foreverness from da cup of love .
    Thankz watz for the beautiful words and support ................

    deep inside thy heart lay a bride a love a Queen
    for i will wrap her in the comfort of foreverness
    and shower her heart in happiness some day..
    Thankz Angel for da loving support and hope u have room on dat wall womannnn!
     
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    At the temple
    bells ring at da
    alter i stand surely
    the leter must have
    reach her table as
    i await her untold love
     
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    ...I just wanna know
    how you write such
    a breathtaking poem
    that talks about
    "spankings, brides
    and true love" all
    in the same flow... :huh:

    ...nice work poet
    *thumbs up* Sage
     
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    thankz SAGE the inner rapture /emotion /vision
    create da moment and how it would be thankz
    sis for the lovin support and words
     
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    aww..




    this is a beautifull piece..






    i dont read much from you ..
    but this one caught my heart...(i know i,m not the only one...)

    yes like wats said....this is a piece that goes beyond...

    where the two of you souls meet...

    i hope this poem finds youre mistery bride
    and that you may travel trough eternal light..


    here on earth....

    and trough ..

    eternity..






    heavenly piece..




    Love..Libertylady:heart:
     
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    *lovely*
    *lovely*
    *lovely*


    WOW...YES :)

    :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:

    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    thankz libertylady for the visit drop in on me often u never know
    what a poet's mind is doing !

    Thankz Bluewater happy u like this letter i so pose to thy Queeneth
    maybe just maybe it's really heard .....
     
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