Black Poetry : Letter to my Heart

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear Heart,

    I’m feeling pretty good about you today.
    Yesterday presented challenges that only
    you could help me overcome.

    I was forced to reconcile a dispute between
    yourself and my mind concerning a certain
    someone who shall remain nameless, but
    surely you must know since her name is
    written all over you.

    Well, I needed to ask myself questions as to
    why I felt so much love for someone I wanted
    so badly but just can’t have…at least not at
    this moment in time.

    That’s when you stepped in and took complete
    control of my emotional turmoil and made me
    realize that it is you that determines this love
    destiny of mine.

    I knew I could depend on you as I always have
    and always will. Since you and I have been
    in tune with one another, I’ve felt like I can
    conquer any romance issue with you safely
    in my corner by my side; just where you
    should be.

    Funny, but you always seem to straighten
    things out when this mind of mine struggles
    daily with you and the strength that you
    alone possess.

    Anyway, I wanted to write you this letter
    because I often rely on you so much during
    so many emotional trials and tribulations.
    I sometimes forget to tell you of my true
    gratitude for always taking good care of
    me…no matter what my mind says when
    he strongly disagrees with you.

    There’s no way I could possibly repay you
    for the many times you’ve saved me from
    sheer disastrous love affairs that could
    have surely destroyed you and I
    simultaneously-and for that I
    am forever in your debt.

    Please know that without you, there
    couldn’t possibly be me. I know that
    sounds a bit cliché but it’s how I feel
    and I thought that you should know.

    I shall end this now because I really
    feel you beating steadily which can
    only mean that you dig where I’m
    coming from and that you feel me too.

    You, my dear heart, are my life and
    I love you very much!

    Sincerely,
    Me

    ©GQInc2001
     
  2. poeticdelight

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    O MY MY MY MY MY

    this was quite stimulating

    keep flowin


    pd
     
  3. Destee

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    awwwwwww GQ ... i love this !!!

    certainly something i do often enuff ...
    have conversations with me ... us ... and them! :wink:

    luv it !!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. Hunter

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    Such an intimate, introspective flow poet...thank-you for scribing your insides....

    *soul-deep*

    :heart:
     
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    Yes! Yes! Yes! Thanks for sharing this.

    BE
     
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    GQ

    I truly love the message here. Thank you for this.

    Thank you for this.

    Thank you for this.

    a
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee-Que.


    ...i'm gonna call this one a "GQClassicFlow"...

    that's just how much i adored it!! :)

    :heart:
    BlakGurl~
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

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    geeq-man, this piece is simply beautiful. thank you for this piece, yes indeed.
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    a funny, sweet, interesting way of describing the inner turmoil between the two major organs that rule our being...
    the idea of writing it it a letter to your heart was just so original and well done...

    K
     
  10. Afridancr

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    nice scribe poet!
     
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