Black Poetry : Letter to A Lady(open in case of emergency)

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista,

    Your heart is both full, and heavy ~
    these words are for your eyes
    and your soul to read

    Inside, your body still quakes from
    the depths of love's touches...

    "and after we touch, then what?"
    still echoes in cascading spirals through
    your mind....

    Even now, as you read, you can feel
    the intensity of your bodies as the fountains
    of waters within you erupted...burst forth...

    your first baptism ~

    and you remember the swirling, delicious dizziness,
    like being atop a tornado's funnel....never
    touching down...

    My sista, you've been blessed with kisses
    that shall never dry, every place he
    touched his lips upon your skin

    You've been opened, dear one...
    You've been held in the arms of the one
    who shares your very soul...

    and it was ....(only you can know)

    There isn't any cure for your full and heavy heart
    This beauty isn't often experienced in many lifetimes...

    You were chosen to know the texture, the scent, the all encompassing nature of real love...you have been to
    the head of the fountain of mysteries

    And you are now MORE of you, because you are ONE with him...

    neither of you shall ever be the same...my sista


    Now go and write the words....



    alyce, 2001
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce, dear poetess, i thank you for this piece...it's simply beautiful. yes, indeed...now i must go write the words!

    ~~~foryopoeticheartstoseeandhear~~~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALYCE

    AGAIN U HAVE BRIGHTEN THE MORNING
    WIT A BEAUTIFUL BLESSING TO DA LADIES

    TRUELY I'LL BE WAITING 4 DA WRITTEN WORD!
    SIS I NEED MO! WHAT ABOUT US GUYZ...??:D

    MO LUV WIT YA
    :heart: :heart: :love: :heart: :heart: :kiss:
     
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    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    The gift of wisdom is bestowed only upon those who have 'been there' and live to impart. Continue to interpret hopes, dreams, and so many other thangs, sis. :wink:

    wow!

    T
     
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    yes...

    tell of the pleasures
    not described by words
    fragrance blown jasmine
    and scented herbs
    massaged into bodies
    both warm and wet
    tell of the pleasures
    you'll never forget.

    write the words.
     
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    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So Beautiful is your flow!!

    This one left me speechless A
    Although I have weighed every word
    My heart is truly heavy with your wisdom today
    A message only you could deliver
    To the very depth of souls
    Still wondering about the 'wonders'
    After we touch......

    :heart:

    *love-train*
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce....


    you are so talented & oh-so wise!

    reading this... i feel as is you were reading
    my heart and speaking directly to me...

    thank you for this. :)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    I agree with the family. I hope she write the words.



    One
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the wise truisms one scribes for oneself
    for others to witness
    is truly
    a thing of beauty...
    thank you.
    -7
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If

    my sistas are feeling this personally, it's all to the good. The only thing I feel qualified to say to my poetic brothas who are having an earth-quakng, soul-mating experience, is: roll wit it, then "go and write the words". But, you already know this.

    Thank you for the responses. Means so much.

    a
     
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