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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As ink dap the paper
    my mind lay on you
    staining my heart
    forth beloveth i do
    i write to my maker

    living da fantasy
    fill in deep desires
    i so betray my feelings
    where thee holds
    this blazin fire

    behold da rapture
    of our existance to have
    as loveth thee capture
    my vision now strive

    I weep forth thy in tears
    peer da loveth of fears
    my only feeling is you
    where art thee of truth
    i humble cry

    Weave under da crystal
    the glair of my soul
    we can journey in da mystal
    of windz to thy place of gold
    let forth thy extremeness tame
    our direction of compassion

    beyond da light my candle burn
    as my instill body now yearn
    to caress and comfort thy dayz
    have one not resight my heart
    thy be my harp of tunes i play

    as i write unto submission
    to secretly confess my love
    O' beloveth hear forth thou
    and feel thee throughout
    da wingz of my sky i fly in
    depth yet shyness passion
    i so loveth thee openly
    i de vor ya vow and keepsake
    da moment of emotions near

    leadeth me in memories
    may da letter reach ya heart
    before my last breath
    i need thee romance me clam
    from thy empty shell of reasons
    dimple my spirit of thy loveth
    and savior thee treasures
    let our just due companionship
    forever linger and bring forth
    child let's celebrate our family
    here under precious memories
    beyond compare or dispair i so
    beggeth thee beloveth

    until the next venture i now
    sleepeth inside my slumber
    dreameth of thee awaiting ya
    return into my chambers
    where as i so lay my perfect note
    :kiss2: :toast: :kiss2:

    A Dyamondluv splash
    Nu~wave~Ink Creation
    Reserved Rights $R
     
  2. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :1on1: I loved this one. Its very elegant and the mixture of old english vocabular and ebonics is original- and it works, really. I like that and not to bite your style, ima try some **** like that lol.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thou pen must be weary
    flowing so with your earnest plea
    For thou beloveth has felt the gentle
    breeze that lies deep within thee
    The ink from the pen has stained
    thou loveth's heart
    And warmed its beating core
    thru to the innermost part
    God knows where fantasy ends
    and reality begins
    When the unimaginable occurs
    and life's fate ultimately wins
    Thou note may rest in chambers
    but the essence of what's meant
    lingers forever in her chambers as well,
    blessed with the power of love sent
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you iwannabe happy you can feel and relate to one's style
    of creation i say try it and master it to perfection forth it's a creative
    that won't go un-notice big ups to ya praise

    tru dat sista watz
    forth thy loveth is beheld within
    unto thy beloveth where art she
    that hold da key as the ink drip
    to canvas da letter written to stain
    and lingering love awaits forth she is
    da essence of thee and da soulful
    warmeth of love one sought
    thankz for the wonder flow and love shown here
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my love for I have heard thy call

    this took me there...i am speechless.....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel happy u was able to recieve the warmth
    of this letter written from da hearts book ...................
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifull warmth in thy letter.......

    i reseaved...




    manny reseaved....






    i send you deep warmth......



    and that god may hold you in his arms...
    for his son needs warmth and to be strong...








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    embracing the warmth thankz Auroraflower for the sweet visit .
     
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