Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, May 4, 2004.
this was well pose'd
how can I describe this.....sister friend, this poem has texture to me. I can feel your actions tactily as if I'm performing them myself. You truly have a gift, and you inspire me in the simplest of sentences. This texture piece has left its imprint on me. Much much respect, dear.
Sometimes you have to just take your cares and woes, package them up, and give them up to God. It can be a painful release, but it can be beyond us mere mortals. Even though there was a sadness in this, believe me I can relate, there was a kind of matter of fact feel to this as well, like you are just resigned to the fact. Anywho, I am feeling this, and understanding in my own realm.
You must write through a "Divine Spirit"...because only in divinity can a spirit sit in one state (mind) ...and move another ...
all who read this will take that journey with you. Thanks for taking me there...
Nice Poem. Nice Poem
Very VERY NICE< I likes yuour stttyle
dang i likes this forreal beautiful poem as alwayz...
*deep long breaths*
its the hardest to do that which your heart KNOWS is right and yet it FEELS otherwise...
be strong sista...what is meant to be will be God willing...you have gained MUCH from a soul stirring letter such as that...and the person behind it is obviously someone who has earned a spot in your heart
uke 2: another flawless scribe- your pen is blessed, poetess!
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