Black Poetry : LETTER FROM HEAVEN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Apr 10, 2009.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 3, 2007
    Messages:
    2,525
    Likes Received:
    261
    Occupation:
    to seek truth
    Location:
    everywhere and nowhere
    Ratings:
    +261
    Never had an american dream
    Never thought 4 a moment
    That I had the right 2
    The pursuit of happiness

    But something in my heart
    U know sort of like that word
    That's on the tip of ur tounge

    Just knew

    C you knew the world when u were seven
    And I remember knowing u at three

    As a girl I always liked love stories
    What love to be protected by a love so strong
    I wonder why did it have to take so long
    Before now I never knew what it meant to belong

    A pices
    A dreamer
    Although a knower
    And not a believer

    Every lyric like the songs from your flute
    Get me caught up in my own rapture
    I'm captivated..
    Even captured

    I love knowing that I love it
    Not like tricks and lucky charms

    Like the wrong songs
    So many tricky songs for the reciting
    But ur music my chioce for the liking

    Isis and Osiris
    Ramose and Nefertari
    Krishna and Radha
    Great loves...

    I know who I was
    And I know who I AM
    On earth Lauren is a woman
    Lawrence is a man

    The truth I don't want to understand
    If we can't be together
    Yes our spirit is entwined forever and ever
    I'll write u a million poems, a million love letters

    If loving you is wrong
    You know the song
    But without you all I know how to do is mourn

    You say be strong
    Well you are my stenghth

    Your my beloved
    And I ur soul

    Without you I know love not
    Your my air every beat of my heart
    Even if I couldn't have you
    My love will never stop

    Nothing of this world could ever appease this desire
    My burning and yearning is an eternal fire

    I don't exist without you
    Why do I cry.. well I miss you
    I miss you for them
    But we had to say good-bye
    But only until the time came to see you again

    My best friend

    What matters there
    Will always matter here
    So if I can't physically love you
    I'll try not to shed a tear
    I won't live in fear
    I won't let you down
    Our dance will always go around and around

    Lamentations are for those who forgot about childlike love
    Hunger pains from the enstranged who chose crips and bloods
    Psychics and frauds trying to stop the rise of the Nile inundation
    Your the five senses but I AM the sensation
    They are the informed WE ARE the information
    Only claimants of slave mantality feel the plantations frustrations

    All I feel is you
    All I know is you

    The creative matrix creates out of love
    Things will go back to the way that it was

    You keep the spotlight that's your proper place
    And I'll keep you in my mind all through time and space

    My devotion to you is ageless
    So the end of the story I'll write those pages
    You taught that no one can tell me who I AM
    So at the end I'll marry you a real woman for a real man
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 28, 2009
    Messages:
    19,252
    Likes Received:
    5,505
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +5,560
    This read like a love letter explaining and defining your love.

    EXQUISITE!

    My favorite part was this:
    That was like saying that this love of yours is the PROTOTYPE and everybody else just wanna have what you have!

    LOVED IT!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Like an intricate tapestry, one line just seemed to naturally weave into the next, until one whole beautiful scribe was created. Wow...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    wow...sound like to talking to me as i accept it....beautifully scribe sis
     
  5. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 3, 2007
    Messages:
    2,525
    Likes Received:
    261
    Occupation:
    to seek truth
    Location:
    everywhere and nowhere
    Ratings:
    +261
    thanks

    the poem in itself is really meta-pysical...

    not sayin that everyone wanna have what i have...

    it speaks to the relationship between GOD and the soul....

    the male element being the god...

    the female element being the soul......
     
  6. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 3, 2007
    Messages:
    2,525
    Likes Received:
    261
    Occupation:
    to seek truth
    Location:
    everywhere and nowhere
    Ratings:
    +261

    hotep Br. Rich...

    if u consider urself a god then no doubt i'm talkin to ya!

    and thanks for the love
     
  7. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 3, 2007
    Messages:
    2,525
    Likes Received:
    261
    Occupation:
    to seek truth
    Location:
    everywhere and nowhere
    Ratings:
    +261
    thank you Sister Watz....

    very humbling ur appreciation of my writings....

    nuff respect
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Singapore
    Joined:
    May 13, 2003
    Messages:
    6,477
    Likes Received:
    110
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Servant of the People
    Location:
    Bay Area, CA
    Ratings:
    +131
    This was a smooth tribute to the result of true love
    and it gives such insight to just how powerful the black unit is when man/woman are one
    Much much props sister miss lady :read:
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - LETTER HEAVEN
  1. AACOOLDRE

    Brother AACOOLDRE : Cato's Letter to Cicero

    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    31
  2. nilevalley
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    137
  3. AACOOLDRE
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    70
  4. AACOOLDRE
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    88
  5. AACOOLDRE
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    64