Black Poetry : Letter #2

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just a rambling poem
    hope yall will enjoy it... :D

    You and I....
    Floating to heaven
    In a perfect dream..

    Feeling sorta a hazy
    Loving our maze only great things can come
    As we walk through this maze as one
    The birth of this creation
    makes a strong foundation....
    Is the perfection of our love
    Growing
    …………..Growing
    The heights we reach together
    You drive me crazy
    I even get mad at you
    But it don’t stop me from loving you
    The way I do...

    Upon the doors of heaven
    I place my heart as my vow
    holding you dear...
    I love you
    I adore you
    This is not a poem ..
    But my heart and my soul
    Flowing with ease...
    Holding your comfort
    Releasing the passion
    I have for us as one
    So it comes free...

    You and I....
    Floating to heaven
    In a perfect dream..
    As No-one can undo
    What we have built
    See…….
    The key to me is you
    As I am to you….

    Love
    Angel
    (C)2004
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rambling it may be, but you always bring a tyte one out, nice drop sista you know I dig your poetry
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    rumbling tyte from da mental i hear ya !
     
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    :confused: Rambel? Well you drop better rambels than most drop regular lines if this is so. Love the feel here MBA. :spinn:

    "Rember If It's A Scorpio It Has Style"​
     
  5. watzinaname

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    Such a feeling of serenity in this flow.
     
  6. jazzymoonchild

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    Sista Angel

    I can completely relate. :wave: :bomb:
    I like your flow. Its pure


     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    Let it pour...your heart and your soul.

    Very nice piece.

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    beautiful

    You and I floting together in a perfect dream....

    See you started this one off with a smashing line.... :luv:
    I'm glad I came in before I left tonight. I will tuck this deram in my pocket.... sssshhhhhh don't tell anyone...lMAO! :shades:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Monetary...thanks for the love and support

    caramelpython...tuck it...:lol: i wont tell

    Peace my brothers thanks for the love
    Angel
     
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    Therious Banned MEMBER

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    all for love, feel dat
     
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