Black Poetry : Let's Vibe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Datpoeticfemme, Mar 21, 2004.

  1. Datpoeticfemme

    Datpoeticfemme Member MEMBER

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    Understanding and Compassion,emotion and elation
    True love and beauty unfilterd and exotic,
    Beautiful expressions written in erotic notes
    A-minors and B-sharps ,alto,soprano,tenor,to
    bass and reconstructed rhythmic parts...
    Two hearts refusing to yeild,dying,pulsating to build
    a life with each other,
    Forgiving, unforseen ways,tears of joy and love flowing
    uncontrollably down the deepest hill...(my cheeks)
    cascading down into the depths of the crater that
    displays itself so prominately when you're near,
    I love ...loving you,I love ...holding you,I love ...kissing
    you,I love....you.
    Two notes waiting so patiently to vibe together,
    I'm staying right here until it's my turn,My Turn With
    You.
    The way I feel about you...words can't explain,no one can take away...
    so powerful,so real...crying and laughing all in the same breath
    Love richer than gold,greater than silver ...true and pure
    every note containing a new bridge...unsure
    where are you going....where will you find another beautiful chord
    that strikes you like mine
    Everlasting and emotional...uncontrollably unique
    Words of beauty...notes too sweet to repeat....my music lingers
    in your ear
    makes you tap your fingers...stomp your feet...sway from side to side...nod your
    head as I speak...yeah I love the way we vibe
    It's like no other melody I've heard
    Emotions,Passion,all rolled up in anything from a noun a verb...
    I feel the movement...enjoy the ride....the ride from my smile to my heart deep inside
    Thank you maestro...you give me excellent direction
    My highs and lows are packed down to perfection
    You and your guidance are the wings of my thoughts,and i cherish your
    patience in all that you taught
    Know that I've learned,loved and vibed with the best
    My vibe and your vibe so different from the rest
    Exclusive and Elusive...evading all costs...each note is perfection
    Each symphony lost...unrehearsed,unpracticed,beautifully connected
    Performence uncut ,excellence expected.....
    Let me get my groove on..with you,it would be nice
    Loving,living,perfectly vibing for the rest of our life.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your vibe was like a beautiful symphony indeed. Keep writing, your pen is on fire.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice drop
    likes the vibe
    continue on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt flow tyte drop
    keep it coming
     
  5. Datpoeticfemme

    Datpoeticfemme Member MEMBER

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    Ty Rich,I'm glad u like.
     
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    nothing is betta the two vibes
    that intertwine and combine
    producing 1 mind
    1 passion
    1 life
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah

    you truly displayed the majesty
    of the conert of love
    the combination of two in the midst thereof

    it' fly..

    one-love,
    /antar
     
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