Black Poetry : Let's sound this out together

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Oct 23, 2015.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sounds
    What do they mean to us?
    A whole lot.
    From when it runs down your tongue
    To
    How it's perceived as we hear the sound coming out.
    Then all the sudden
    We stop
    Sometimes
    To think
    Remove ourselves from it literally
    Which is a mis take happening
    Cause our experience
    Explaines how we came up with our
    perception of sound
    Not to be excluded
    Coming to us with our heart strings
    To be tugged and manuevered
    Will let out the result
    The stringing of the mask is fromed
    As others add in
    Remembering the basis
    How we want this to come about
    Always feeling for, "How's this coming across?"
    Counting on syllables
    To come together
    While our past learnings
    Tell us to get outside the box.
    Just member to discuss this beforehand
    For agreement with the symphonies
    Composition.
    Cause you are only one of a few
    Creatures creating sound.
    Cause I cause my own vibrational effect.
    Should be right here right now.
    Simply put into contextual form.
    Which will effect the outcome as a whole.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh this was definitely a thinker as well really had the reader following the lines to learn as the piece/carried on made for a good read :) Thank you poet!
     
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    Sorry for the late response. I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
    Candeesweet
     
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    Wonderful piece, sis. Especially like:

    "Counting on syllables
    To come together
    While our past learnings
    Tell us to get outside the box."
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everybody else does!
    Sis I'm so Happy you enjoyed this!
     
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