Black Poetry : Let's SHINE!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Twofish, Mar 24, 2003.

  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with deliberation, we'll overcome the situation
    Our Nation has fell victim to indoctrination
    elevation is the key yet most are busy wasting
    precious time, killing their minds,
    steady tryin to define a reason why
    when the why is "fear", and the answer is no where near
    the solution is clear, to clean out the pollution that's here
    begin a revolution and steer our evolution
    back to progression, it's seems as though I'm preaching a lesson
    but honestly it's a suggestion, an introspective question
    for those who guessing, becuz I know LIFE is a BLESSIN
    and all I want to do is build in this lyrical session,
    and make spiritual connections

    BE YOUR PROTECTION!
    BELIEVE IN REDIRECTION
    OF THOUGHT
    Enable Positivity to Shine
    Like Your Soul's Taught

    1luv Divine People, Let's Shine People,
    UNITY IS KEY, DESTINY IS FREE
    2 those who see...

    Eternally...
    2fish
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Say It 2fish

    we are listening

    one

    pd

    :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish

    This is great!! Nice read'n you again sustah!!

    N2 :)
     
  4. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl where you been?????!!!!! i missed reading your work! but you came back strong though. i'm feeling this piece/peace especially. nice drop 2-Fish. don't stay away so long next time ;)

    Kim
     
  5. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    skillz

    Soul food for real!
    Much substance and
    the talent is undeniable.
    Go 'head and shine luv!
     
  6. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "BELIEVE IN REDIRECTION
    OF THOUGHT
    Enable Positivity to Shine "

    I loved everything especially that part. I am gonna apply.



    I'm just sayin...
     
  7. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back again
    to tell my friends
    I still exist
    with a raised fist
    singing "freedom..."
    yeah...it's freedom time now

    1luv
    2fish
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is great!
     
  9. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin this :)
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    get your shine on :toast:

    l wont get used to your pressence...
     
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