Black Poetry : Lets make War not Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Nov 28, 2001.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to let my fingers walk
    and make a pathway of their own
    around your body

    like soldiers of seduction
    marching across your skin
    conquering your senses
    marching to the tune
    of some timeless love song

    tracing a trail of fire
    and leaving behind
    only burning skin

    I want to assault your senses
    until you are helpless
    and offer no resistance

    taking you prisoner~
    locking you away inside my love

    torturing you on a daily basis~
    making you writhe in agony
    and scream in ecstacy
    until your energy is depleted

    continuing the onslaught
    until you surrender
    your love

    I want you to be my battlefield
    where I can wage a war

    my main objective~
    to capture your heart

    (c) nfn 2001
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    o-kay sister girl...

    i see you hit us with the flip side

    when i saw the title

    i was like WHAT!.. o.k, she must be trippin' :lol:

    but excellent concept on the real

    peace

    pd
     
  3. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soldiers of seduction. Now that's an army right there! Nice piece.

    BE
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY

    well scribed.....ahhhhhhh, the visuals

    thank you

    a
     
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    Kitana.....

    As always your scribe is on fiya...
    work it!

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You killin me K

    I kinda expected from the title that you had flipped it. this was excellent!

    Loved It
    Reas
     
  7. saniyya

    saniyya New Member MEMBER

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    Man, I'm feeling you on that one!!!
    Nice, very nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the war u pose

    has captured my heart gurl u flip da script fo real
    and i love it !...............thank u K.:heart: :kiss:
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd...your comment just made me smile real big and let out a little laugh..thanks for the words and for appreciating the flip side...:D

    BE..this is the sort of army you like to call to war yeah...

    A...glad you could see the vision, tried to put it over without gettin tooooo carried away...

    Epip...thanks for the compliment..glad you liked it..

    Reason...thanks for lovin' my words...means a lot to me...

    saniyya...thanks..makes you kinda wanna play war games all the time huh....

    Cindy...you know I appreciate the comment...thanks for liking my battle plan...

    Rich...thanks for feelin it....just havin a bit of fun with some words..

    K
     
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    themac46 Active Member MEMBER

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    Awaken

    As it was said after Japan bombed Pearl Harbor.
    "You have woke a sleeping gaint"

    the visible of this was very deep. I makes you use that part of your mine that is sleep.

    I like very good

    :rolling: :rolling:
     
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