Black Poetry : Let's get real...

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  1. calisugga17

    calisugga17 New Member MEMBER

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    Let's get real,
    Get right,
    And back to them days when our love was sooo...
    Tight
    To them days when we couldn't even wait to get to the back,
    so I loved you from the frontseat,
    When I could call you my lover,
    And more importantly my friend,
    When I could count on you to be my down *** ***** 'til the end,
    And I'm not talking about shooting 'em out,
    I'm talkin' about when I could trust you to
    wipe my tears, when you didn't even know what I was crying about,
    that one to understand and support me
    when the whole world doubts me
    the one to tell me,
    "those jeans are just a little too small, but I like yo' fat ***"
    See Mr. Real rubbed my back when I was pregnant,
    He stayed up the whole nine hours i was in labor, cuz he didn't want to leave me alone,
    and when that baby came held him in his arms
    not because I asked
    But because he was real,
    He knew the pain was real, and i knew the love was real,
    Baby let's get real,
    And back to them days that you were with me and I was with you,
    Just for the pure plain pleasure of being,
    I liked being, and more importantly,
    being with you.
    Now we have this son,
    You say things are not the same, let's go back in the days,
    And in reality we can't,
    So baby...
    get real
    Circumstances may be hard
    but the fact still remains
    I'm inlove with you just as much as the first day,
    so yea ma' might be a little bit tired,
    and daily turn into weekly specials,
    but baby...
    I'd still starve to feed you,
    Drop you my last dime,
    wipe your tears even when you're too proud to cry,
    and kiss your ear to wake you up in the morning,
    so although i may not be loving u like i used to,
    What's more important is that baby I love you, now even more than I used to...
    and that's real
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Times can become difficult, but deep within a heart that same spirit is there, even under all the strain. This piece flowed genuinely "real" and I felt the anguish in the words. Welcome to Destee poet, hope to read more from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    very nice drop..............
     
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