Black Poetry : let's "fall" in love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Oct 21, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    leaves fall carelessly and gently
    as the mood of the day
    reflects the radiance of the sun and crisp blue of the sky...
    l sneak behind to catch you
    just so your laughter can add the finishing touches to the art
    of autumn...

    you're look warm and even lovelier when you're fully clad
    (scarf and all)
    and i want to give you that same secure feeling by the fireplace tonight to the sounds of Norman Brown,
    Wayman Tisdale and that old N.E joynt we use to play
    as we lay- me holding you as you cuddle in my arms....

    what can l do to please you
    it's something about you that makes me want to ease you
    when everything is o.k...

    it's something about this season that makes me want to write you
    love poetry for no reason
    you're my one...
    but know that l am not your season l am your Sun
    throughout them all....


     
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    JHIAH here it is!and standing
    beautifuul poem...


    oehhh ..."but know that i,m not youre season i am youre sun" troughout them all

    as this poem shines through.....
     
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    Great piece j'hiah
    Truly beautiful and touchingly emotive.
    tyte
    *Emma*
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx to both queens

    nfinite....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dayum bruh! ya ready to take it all in
    and i feel ya when da warmth set in da
    love flows out .....
     
  6. elayne.

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    hugehead.


    this is truly beautiful... soooo... i cain't
    even front! :)

    "you're my one...
    but know that l am not your season l am your Sun"...

    i liked that part especially! :D

    itsallnfiniteLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    nothin' wrong with gettin' yo' play on playa

    and the color gave that feel

    DSS
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,
    you's my peep :toast:

    Sherykah,
    so are you queen and thanx

    ultra (elayne),
    thanx girl.. better be nice when we talk again or else l'll have to check you like always :fight:
    ... you know it's love the hard way


    nfinite.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J!!!

    Brill the way you worked this one Poet!!! can't say that I expected less...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *still falling*
     
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