Khasm13 : let's do this...

Discussion in 'Khasm13' started by Khasm13, Sep 5, 2003.

  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the times we've had
    oh Lord, the times we've had
    the good and the bad
    being in love
    then being at each others throats
    both of us flying high like a dove
    then sit'n at the bottom of the sea
    in a suken boat
    time and time again my hopes
    have seemed to be for naught
    but i could neva deny that my heart you caught
    i ought to have just walked away
    from all the pain we've been through in the day
    and in the night
    but my love will not let me give up the fight
    so easily
    cause i still get a rush from please'n thee
    i remember how you told me you could neva forget me
    and how you missed me
    when we weren't together
    i believe you when you say things are going to be betta
    i read ya love letter
    bout 50 times
    and replayed it 100 more times in my mind
    i guess we'll both know in time
    whether this will be sweet
    or sour like a lime
    but i do know i love you more
    then my dopest rhyme
    so lets do this
    and i hope it's not a crime
    to want you to be mine
    forever....
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooohhhh, this is beautiful. Y'all do the **** thang! LOL khasm, you touched me with this one.
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm
    Do that thing. Nice flow.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa :jawdrop: she aint gon say no lol :lol: u got a whole fan club lol so...blessings be upon ya love endeavor :)
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks fam....
    i has a good imigination....
    i thought i told ya'll that before :)
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all snap ! bruh u done put the max on dis one
    tyte scribe 4 real !
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this
    its nice
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoooaaaaa!!!

    this is sooo tyte, i'm feeling this... i know this exact feeling.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is exactly why I'm Khasm Fan#1....(no joke)

    yes u may throw down the dopest rhymes but

    you are above all versatile...........and when you come...

    you come correct and "real"..........WOW.................

    I now have an initiative to expand the fan club and get u a manager...:wink: I'm luvin your work!
     
  10. Khasm13

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    you guys are too kind...:)
    that's why this place stays on my mind...
    i know i'm not da best love poet...
    maybe oneday when my heart is in a betta place
    i'll be able to give ya'll a betta taste...
    peace
    khasm
     
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