Black Poetry : Lets Call in Today

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticManifesta, Jun 14, 2005.

  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *yawns*
    "Good morning Sweetie,"
    .........."Goodmorning Beautiful,"
    Rustling of the sheets,
    Footsie going on beneath,
    Naked bodies tangled,
    Drool on cheeks,
    Morning breath kisses,
    "I dont want to go to work,
    .......... "neither do I"
    Covers fly back,
    bodies retreat,
    seperation begins,
    "How about round three?"
    .........*laughs*
    ........."think you can handle it?"
    The shower comes on,
    bathroom filled with steam & heat,
    "Ahh.. that feels good...
    ......... "Mmmm.. this feels better"
    Moans fill the shower,
    slippery, sloppy sex..
    ......... "Mmmmm, *bites lip*
    ......... "[email protected]."
    Kisses... Sucking.. Riding too!
    "Where would I be without you?"
    ......... "on time to work... *laughs*
    Lotioning, Licking.. Dressing for work,
    Hugs are exchanged,
    and kisses last forever,
    Turns off the t.v,
    The forcast is for bad weather,
    "Honey?"
    ....... "Yes, I know what your thinking
    lets call in today, and go for round four"
    "No, lets meet for lunch.. at the Waldorf,
    on Madison and Le Fleur.
    I want you on the bear rug, for round four!"



    ___________________
    Giddieyup!

    :horse:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about in the heat of the moment, well actually there was more than just one moment in there...Quite a sensual flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well heatwave fo sho in that room morning sunshine and divine rodeo
     
  4. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol.. thank yall. im trying.. it really feels like the words have left me.. but the passion is still here!
     
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    re:Call In

    A very sensual write. :bellydance:
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very hot up in here (smile)
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    i loved it...
     
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    I really liked this one
     
  9. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got say that this piece is burning up. I definitely feeling your unique structure, title, everything and what else can I say but all around fantastic poetic joint!
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry mamma, deepy, swtt, the_emmisary..

    Thank yall all.. this was my first poem after my writers block.. and it really means alot to me, since i havent really crated a verse in nearly 2months now.. thany yaall. .. im glad yall like it. :smooch:
     
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